Review Detail of EvilSovereignty in Fallen Chronicles

Item: Fallen Chronicles
Rating: 1

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EvilSovereigntyLv23mthEvilSovereignty

Utter Trash. For 70 chapters we get nothing but story about some random nobody girl author put for whatever reasons. Like no one wants it broo we are here for those 5 Girls and he only gets to meet her from what I have checked briefly on ch 70 and even it's only 1 girl at that. Like wow man who the f is eileen? Why would you add her? And even if you contract her shouldn’t you fastpace so he can meet Suthia instead of arcs of some random girl for 1-70 chapters the whole story plot you designed was good but the way you executed it seems different from what the sypnosis’s promises it utterly disappointing

Fallen Chronicles

Hail_The_loli

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EvilSovereigntyLv2EvilSovereignty

I know that they aren’t normal and what's that got to do with you dragging so many chapters?

Hail_The_loli:Thanks for the Rivew, Eileen will have some big rules in the future. so I can't ignore creating her character as she was a total outsider from the game. And about his wives. Their state is not normal. you will know if you read further.

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Hail_The_loliAuthorHail_The_loli

Thanks for the Rivew, Eileen will have some big rules in the future. so I can't ignore creating her character as she was a total outsider from the game. And about his wives. Their state is not normal. you will know if you read further.

3mth

K4geno_K4miLv3K4geno_K4mi

thx for telling i was wondering when he meets his girls but i guess i will not read it because even 25 chaps would be too much of a waste to wait but 70????

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