Review Detail of Honest_critic1980 in Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms

Will this story has potential, it give good description of background and ability for what the mc can buy. unfortunately the are some big flaws I can't ignore. one story seems rush. a lot of things are happening so fast, it doesn't seem realistic. midevil time building thing super fast with manpower shortage at the beginning. The character aren't developed well. Mc get a paragraph about himself, (beside stats update), all other characters bearly have a description, and are bots that just follow orders. also the feeling I get is his ruling is a small province not a country, and is only ruling town. it feels like a mobile game where you are constantly upgrade the town. Still I like the story. idea is there just need more detail, and thought.