Question: Is this story finished with 31 chapters? I felt the theme "tried too hard", but otherwise did make me empathize with the story. I also liked how the story felt fresh, mostly because of how much OC (Original Content) was added into the story while mixing Naruto content and adding common sense, while also being whimsical enough to add more silly things! The super long author notes at the end of many chapter that's more than 2 paragraphs... annoying... I'd like to rate this series 4/5 stars
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LIKEThanks for the review, this story I wrote years ago and after discovering this website, I decided to post it here. The whole story is a deconstruction of the normal Naruto story where he loves and wants to be apart of a village and culture that wants nothing to do with him and never done anything to earn it. Also interesting note, I created the guardians the robot guards long before I learn about Dishonored 2 having robot soldiers. I did a simpsons thing where I correctly guess what would show up in something before it happen.
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