Review Detail of Dany_K_9260 in My Family in the Novel?

Thought the MC would transmig w/ family but the eldrich touch is nice. But a few things I cannot get past is the loss of braincells trying to understand the beginning as the author does nothing to make it make sense and leaves readers at a loss trying to understand. System or status takes up so much space but ok small complaint. Where i had to drop was making the chapter excessively long by describing characters like they’re fukin art masterpieces- I don’t need an essay to know how his family looks. Last but not least- his whore sister. First chapter she’s complaining the MC (before transmig) walking in on her getting screwed by 5 guys, and the failed posioning on him. And what happens later… you guessed it, she’s in the harem. Can’t you just stick with the nice maid or something. Is it really necessary to do all the world building and plotting to have him screw his sister that he literally said ‘is for the streets’? Anyways novels isn’t bad by WebNovel standards just disappointing and at times confusing.