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joey_thomas
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Author how you write is cringy and childish this is by far the worst main character i have read and I can already see that the store development going to be trash the character design is childish.

Kido System in Bleach

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ridhibrata_das
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It is my first fanfic, so I am experimenting this writing style, I will gradually but surely change the writing style