Review Detail of Sylent in Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!

The story plotline seems okay. I can't tell if the translation is terrible or if the author was really that bad. The gender of one character might change paragraph to paragraph. The names are inconsistent; at one point the child's last name was different in the same paragraph. So bad. It seems this story was written with Chinese names at first then changed to super awkward Western names later. I would love to read this with the original names. Anyone know if there is a translated version of this with the original names?