Review Detail of TeHdOrK101 in what if naruto had the powerful six eyes with gojo's power {Completed}

Not what I was hoping for, the idea is great, but the execution of the story isn't good at all. Instead of clear writing of a story with great potential, it all seems like one BIG summary. Writing Quality is goodStory Development isn't horribleCharacter Designs are badAt the time of this review I assume it to be doneNo world background