this idea of story is honestly really interesting. The story development is fantastic. the writing quality is a bit of, but I guess that can be fixed. Congratulations on a good story.
KK_Khine
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LIKEcan you please check out mine because I need a second opinion.my story is "Darkness rising: a League of legends fantasy*
KK_Khine:hello there, thanks for checking out the story! Glad to hear you find the idea interesting and like where the plot is going. đI'll definitely work on improving the writing quality. really appreciate your feedback đ