Review Detail of The1Anarchy in Incubus In Danmahci (rewrite)

Warning: this review is written through a translator and English is not my first language. This is fucked up. Why am I giving it 2 stars? Cain as a character is not revealed. He easily reaches level 2. Mind you, that counts as an ACHIEVEMENT in the original. Characters. They are cardboard and unrevealed. The writing is terrible. The reactions of Loki and her family.... It's not written in a believable way. A "nobody" comes in and says he wants to join Loki. And the gate guard goes to his Goddess to wake her up. A regular fucking guard. Goes to annoy his God for some random character. It's a weird look. The reaction to him and his stats. The world of Dunmachi has a huge amount of cheats already. If you're not a completely stupid person, you can at least become an average adventurer. Cain is too OP and it's spelled out disgustingly as well. I can't even imagine who would read that.