good proposal I read some chapters and there are some cliché ideas but I don't hate the "cliché" I just hate it when it's done wrong. but I must say that you missed the chance to make a unique character with Whitebeard's characteristics, "ah but he's giant" simple make a plot of him being a genetic mutation, there is also the question of the name, I could use Whitebeard's name, it's very unique and cool. (I wrote using the translator on my keyboard)
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