Review Detail of jaymanifesto in Solo Dominance

At first I was hooked. I was captivated by your title and synopsis. So far, your definition of the “One Above All” is what helps your story stand out, though from what I heard, there’s already a character that’s named One Above All, if I’m not mistaken. What I like about this story is the power play here, where MC basically puts himself on a pedestal above others, with those others being treated equally (correct me if I’m wrong). Haven’t read all of the story yet, but I suggest more descriptive dialogue on the beginning especially since your starting point will leave a lasting impression. Make every word count. Before writing the backstory, think of certain questions the reader would have in advance, if you know what I mean. By this way, you are trying to get into the perspective of the reader who of course will be full of questions upon reading your novel. Basically if you ask me, a backstory should be able to answer three questions: What was the character’s past like? What made them that way? What is expected of their future? Anyways, here are my two cents. Your novel has potential, though the end goal to me, is quite generic. He plans to create a world where he is superior above all and that it’ inhabitants are all equal without any form of discrimination. This is quite common in post-apocalyptic and sci-fi genres. Overall, I think your concept is badass, and I happen to enjoy concepts that have to do with such. Good luck on your writing journey!