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Review Detail of Joseon_Walking in Solo Dominance

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Everything is great and I really enjoyed it, but I think the script style for dialogue makes it a bit messy to read. I would rather FEEL the emotion coming from the characters as they are speaking and what they are emoting. Keep it up. You are doing well. I will add this to my collections.

Solo Dominance

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I had the idea of updating my book after 20 reviews, I'll add a bit more narrations and emotions as you told, Thanks for your honest review, It helps me a lot!