I can say that I liked the story, but I found the second half less engaging than the first. Especially the Graveyard arch (I call it that, a bit boring for me). In terms of problems, I would probably highlight the grammar. I read through a translator, but occasionally there are moments where the text sits. And so I want to thank you for this story and hope that your next fanfic will be even better).
SrCuervo
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