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Review Detail of Slava_Ursaki in Fate/Dark Knight

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Terrible way of storytelling,the dialogue and story are poorly written and the plot moves too quickly.

Fate/Dark Knight

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I mean I wouldn't know if it's good or not I am just doing things by my own thoughts. Some may like it and others such as yourself may say they don't like it.

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but anyway, just tell me what was wrong with the storytelling/dialogue so that I can improve on it.