Review Detail of seabas_ippo in Shattered Realms: Regression of a Guardian Knight
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This story is pretty good with an interesting premise, when it comes to writing quality there are barely any typos, however this story is quite difficult to follow it’s as if the entire story is summarized the only in depth part of the story is the descriptions and inner monologues. The world this story takes place in is a mystery, the character barely has any human interaction along with the fact that there is random time skips with no explanation of what occurred between,a good example of how nothing is really explained is how the character states his location, in the story he appeared in the bankai star empire but the character did not talk about his surroundings or where exactly in the empire he is, he instantly talks to this guy omar and goes on a quest, he instantly appears in the Forrest with no explanation of how he got there.
Shattered Realms: Regression of a Guardian Knight
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RealDarkSeraph:Thanks for the review. Funny enough, I was actually in the middle of a mini world building as Connor is now back in town. His mind was too preoccupied with the sudden quests for him to actually see the place he’s in. I’ll explain what buildings and shops starting town have. The human interaction will increase in the upcoming chapters. Players, Guilds, and more will be explored and talked about. Connor will definitely have pleasant and unpleasant interactions with them. And I do skip over the boring details of him just running through the Bonsai Plains. It’s a relatively safe place due t the road being constructed. All in all, the holes will be filled in so that the story doesn’t seem quite empty.image
Thanks for the review. Funny enough, I was actually in the middle of a mini world building as Connor is now back in town. His mind was too preoccupied with the sudden quests for him to actually see the place he’s in. I’ll explain what buildings and shops starting town have. The human interaction will increase in the upcoming chapters. Players, Guilds, and more will be explored and talked about. Connor will definitely have pleasant and unpleasant interactions with them. And I do skip over the boring details of him just running through the Bonsai Plains. It’s a relatively safe place due t the road being constructed. All in all, the holes will be filled in so that the story doesn’t seem quite empty.