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I will give a complete honest review! Okay concept people have tried here and there. Primitive boy getting a system. Fresh. Writing quality okay. But main thing lacking is relatively of main charcacter to reader, for some reason I cannot connect to the main character at all.There is one novel with somewhat similar settings but fantasy, an modern guy waking as goblin, he was fully grasped to that cultural settings yet was relatable to modern readers, I was hoping for something like that, but it's okay.Good Luck.

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Primitive Man

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T0xicity
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Thanks to you as well mate!

ShoTen:It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.
ShoTen
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*Relatable

T0xicity
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What story is the goblin one?

HambinoRanx
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Think he means rise of the Skeleton King, a goblin shows up and is like the best side character ever

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
T0xicity
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I’ll check it out, thanks mate!

HambinoRanx:Think he means rise of the Skeleton King, a goblin shows up and is like the best side character ever
HambinoRanx
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Anytime King

T0xicity:I’ll check it out, thanks mate!
ShoTen
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It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
Santy_Melay
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Because you could empathize more with someone reincarnated instead of a primitive fool, which is why I can't read it either.

CallmeCyrus0409
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maybe the Re:monster manga?

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
Pekokopiko
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bruh, that fic is trash

ShoTen:It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.