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Review Detail of Deathly_Rose in Focused Fire (ATLA)

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Deathly_Rose
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Great story but your a horrible person for including some mild Ntr it came out of nowhere and genuinely made me want to stop reading. For those of you who haven’t hit the three digit mark in chapters Azula has a mental breakdown and her friend Ty Lee takes advantage of her during said breakdown. And while Xiang does address it, it wasn’t taken care of properly and it kind of ruins, a lot of the character development or at least makes you question how much Azula valued their relationship. Or least makes you question what kind of a person Ty Lee is so besides the NTR it’s a great book and it’s definitely worth reading

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Focused Fire (ATLA)

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Deathly_Rose
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Calling you a horrible person is obviously an overreaction but still I can’t figure out why you included it? I personally would’ve enjoyed the later chapters a lot more if it didn’t happen