Review Detail of Chelsea_Lolipop in MHA: Living as Kurumi Tokisaki

there are too many mistakes in the writing first: misuse of his abilities there is no explanation about his strange powers in terms of the world mha... second: he kills or captures slime criminals I'm surprised she can still walk calmly without being caught by the heroes (mha motto heroes don't kill) and also Alright is in place, he just silently ignores it too out of character with other heroes... Maybe you should try reading the Fanfic "Throne of Time" It's the same as your story Kurumi in mha with clear logic...