Review Detail of Thelostimmortal in Author's Rebirth

Item: Author's Rebirth
Rating: 4.2

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According me this is good but theres still a room for improvement. you can improve it more. You should try writing with Third person. But in all this is A quire good novels so I will recommend that you should read it.

Author's Rebirth

JetLord004

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JetLord004AuthorJetLord004

Thank You for your kind review. I would try my level best to improve my grammar throughout the story and as for your 3rd pov I can only say I will try, as I had never written a story in 3rd pov.

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