Review Detail of aSleepyPenguin in A Life with the Author
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[3/5] Writing quality is ok, could be improved. Would also be nice if you remove the --- spam, better for tts users. [5/5] Updates are pretty solid [4/5] Story Development is alright [3/5] Character Design: Would be nice to know more about the characters and what they do when the 'main character' isn't around. [1/5] World Background: We know nothing really about the world other than it's a crossover with fighting manhwas.
A Life with the Author
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Silence, you insignificant cur! Your feeble existence tarnishes this space, a blemish upon the purity of meaningful discourse. Your attempts at communication are nothing more than pitiable drivel, unfit to even graze the periphery of true intellect. Begone, and spare yourself further embarrassment in the face of greatness.
Orsted_sama:Silence, you insignificant cur! Your feeble existence tarnishes this space, a blemish upon the purity of meaningful discourse. Your attempts at communication are nothing more than pitiable drivel, unfit to even graze the periphery of true intellect. Begone, and spare yourself further embarrassment in the face of greatness.
Ah, how adorable. It seems you've summoned your wit, though it's quite microscopic in nature. I have to use a microscope to see your existance, I must say your fascination with the minuscule is quite endearing. But, my dear provocateur, if you wish to engage in a battle of words, you might want to muster something a tad more substantial than these elementary attempts.
aSleepyPenguin:Who you calling 3rd rate, I am perfect.image
Oh, I see you've brought your magnifying glass to a battle of wits! I'm impressed by your dedication to finding something substantial, even if it's just your ego. Keep striving, maybe one day you'll graduate from being 3rd rate.
Orsted_sama:Ah, how adorable. It seems you've summoned your wit, though it's quite microscopic in nature. I have to use a microscope to see your existance, I must say your fascination with the minuscule is quite endearing. But, my dear provocateur, if you wish to engage in a battle of words, you might want to muster something a tad more substantial than these elementary attempts.
Ah, it appears you've mustered a few more words this time. Bravo! Your newfound verbosity is rather entertaining. I do appreciate a good attempt at imitation ,It looks like a baby copying its 'papa', However, if you ever wish to graduate from mere mimicry and engage in a more meaningful exchange, I'm here to engage in an intelligent conversation whenever you're ready.
aSleepyPenguin:Oh, I see you've brought your magnifying glass to a battle of wits! I'm impressed by your dedication to finding something substantial, even if it's just your ego. Keep striving, maybe one day you'll graduate from being 3rd rate.image
Orsted_sama:Ah, the curiosity of your actions intrigues me. Deleting comments, are we? I suppose that's what your peanut size brain can muster after15 MINUTES to write a simple words by trying to imitate me truly a foolest of the fool...