Review Detail of Kancha_T in Marvel: The Dimensional Mercenary

I haven't seen the series this story is based on so I genuinely liked what you did with the plot till now. The development of Door-Door fruit which was considered an auxiliary type into something truly dangerous by MC is amazing to see and read. Also the story is dark but that's usually the case for X-Men verse I believe 🤷🏻 The plot is intriguing and the pace is action packed throughout. My only gripe is the grammar! 😫 Sometimes names, and sometimes the sentence themselves are a headache to understand. All in all, a story worth waiting for.