Review Detail of faesr in His Start (My Hero Academia)
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The_MystryAuthorThe_Mystry
actually I don't think son should follow the same path as his father did he should find his own path, I'm sorry for this funky plot but I will work hard and improve.
faesr:um honestly just the grammar and also plot is a little funky because he suddenly gained power from the military through a breathing style, not hate but it aint making him the number 1 hero
The_MystryAuthorThe_Mystry
faesrLv13faesr
um honestly just the grammar and also plot is a little funky because he suddenly gained power from the military through a breathing style, not hate but it aint making him the number 1 hero
The_Mystry:I'm sorry it was my first time writing tell me what are the things need to improve i will surely work on them