Review Detail of Zero_Five_7869 in Jujutsu Kaisen: Clash with curses
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You can't make every country have sorceres and curses unless you get rid of Tiangen barriers and if you that the entire plot is non-existent.I am not reading until I get am answer.
Jujutsu Kaisen: Clash with curses
Finn3
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This is fanfic. From the moment I inserted my character in the story, it became the new story. Of course, because of my lack of creativity, I am using the pre-existing story. So I want to use certain expect of the story but at the end of day, I am creating new story. You can ignore this if you want. There will be plot hole, I think. I haven't see that in my story beside bad grammar.
Honoured_Writer:That just brings up even more plot holes
Yeah, that is why the plot will change. There will be a barrier protecting Japan and suppressing curses but other countries will also have their method. It's like their own domain against threats. I don't have time to write the entire world-building here. So I can only say just read the story. Of course, you can choose to not read as well. Good day.
I see...but this will lead to another problem which is the purpose of the barriers, The only reason Tengen made them was to limit curses to only Japan, it wasn't exactly for the protection of Japan but for other countries, a lesser evil of sort. I will read and review again
Finn3:Yeah, that is why the plot will change. There will be a barrier protecting Japan and suppressing curses but other countries will also have their method. It's like their own domain against threats. I don't have time to write the entire world-building here. So I can only say just read the story. Of course, you can choose to not read as well. Good day.
Zero_Five_7869:I see...but this will lead to another problem which is the purpose of the barriers, The only reason Tengen made them was to limit curses to only Japan, it wasn't exactly for the protection of Japan but for other countries, a lesser evil of sort. I will read and review again
Finn3:Yeah, that is why the plot will change. There will be a barrier protecting Japan and suppressing curses but other countries will also have their method. It's like their own domain against threats. I don't have time to write the entire world-building here. So I can only say just read the story. Of course, you can choose to not read as well. Good day.
Finn3:This is fanfic. From the moment I inserted my character in the story, it became the new story. Of course, because of my lack of creativity, I am using the pre-existing story. So I want to use certain expect of the story but at the end of day, I am creating new story. You can ignore this if you want. There will be plot hole, I think. I haven't see that in my story beside bad grammar.
What is your point? Have plot holes in my story? I don't understand how many plot holes I created because I wanted to write my own fanfic. It's just dumb.
Honoured_Writer:Speaking a whole lot of nothing in one sentence and just completely ignored the point of my comment