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The writing is solid I saw few if any grammar errors the story flows well, but I would like a bit more sensory detail here and there (not much just a few spots I noticed seemed...empty? My biggest pet peeve is no spaces between paragraphs makes it really hard to read on webnovel, but that is a formatting issue not writing issue.

ECHOES OF FATE

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Thank you for your valuable feedback. I'll work on revising my story to make it even better.I hope you continue reading more chapters