Review Detail of bewoulf3000 in Who Needs Magical Talent? I have SCIENCE!

Thank you for your feedback! A couple things I’d like to note. First off, the decision to move his backstory from chapter 1 to the Auxilary was a personal one. Though relevant to his character, I didn’t want to get bogged down in the details. After all, that wasn’t the story I was trying to tell. Second. The decision to leave his parents was long coming. As mentioned, he was being run ragged. No chance of personal time, no chance of social interaction, no chance of family time. Just work work work. When he found out the cause of all that strife was not his benefit like initially assumed, but hope for financial gain, it gave perspective to the last 11 years of his life. So he left trying to escape his miserable situation. (This was already explained in my initial writing) Third. Yes his focus on dying a Virgin was a bit much considering he was DYING. However he was a young man, and that’s what was on his mind before dying. While the story is written in third person, it follows him and his perspective. Once his perspective shifts and he’s given the time to slow down and reflect, I have every intention to let him understand the full implications of everything he’s experienced (This is already hinted at in a few of these early chapters) As for your last criticism, yes it’s very difficult to find a completely original reincarnation work. This novel was written as a fan of the genre wanting to avoid some of it’s more irksome common tropes (Creepy/Edgelord MC, Harem, etc). All in all, thank you for reading my novel, I’d ask you give it a fair chance before deciding it’s unoriginal and lacks depth. I have plans for this story to be well over 1000 chapters, so there’s only so much I can get across in 12. Thank you!