I've read the whole thing and did not criticize the author a single bit, the story was so well done. I had a good read, and spent the whole morning in bed with this. The characters were actually well written and most of the time they were portrayed correctly. I'm impressed with the plot, even tho it was short and was following the plot but it had a twist of its own surrounding the mc. I only hoped for more world building and descriptions on details for it to be more "alive".good work, seriously recommend this read.
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