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Item: Naruto: Under the Banner of the Clans
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good grammer but full of xinxia cliche... yeah everyone mocks mc for what--(being orphange) as if mc is center of world and every other person have nothing to do except mock mc for being orphange.... 2 chapter and my blood pressure rised reading continous moking cliche bulshit.... if you can go through cliche than this story is great for you...

Naruto: Under the Banner of the Clans

vionltron

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vionltronAuthorvionltron

Thank you for your critique, I must say you are absolutely right. I intentionally included many cliches in the first two chapters. Originality starts from chapter 3... But yes, there are cliches, and I'm trying to have some fun with them. However, there will be fewer of them in the future.

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