Review Detail of BurgerNoTomatoes in Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Review detail
With this treasure, I summon... a 5 Star Review. OC Insert Reincarnated with The Ten Shadows Technique From JJK into the Naruto World, with LIMITED Knowledge. The Story takes its time to develop. It's Funny? (Sometimes, though laughing at your own jokes is kind of weird so I'll leave this option vague and up to your judgment) It's Interesting? (Could be) It's Slice Of Life? (Sort of.) Has Action? (Working on it) Has Adventure? (Working on it) Has Romance? (Eventually, not any time soon) No Harem? (Yes, there is no harem) Realistically Strong MC? (Still too early to conclude but I'm trying my best so that would be the case) Does He Have Mahoraga On Speed Dial? (Mahoraga has been ghosting him lately) Does his Domain Expand? (Later on in the far future. When cars can fly and chickens can too. Chickens can't fly, you won't convince me otherwise.) Is the MC a Chad? (No, but he's trying) Conclusion... Read it if this interests you! If you have any questions I try my best to respond to them! I also enjoy any time of feedback and interaction! It helps me improve the fic alongside you readers! *Cough* Steal Ideas *Cough* And hope you enjoy the fic if you decide to read it!
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
BurgerNoTomatoes
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BurgerNoTomatoes:Undecided yet. It's not the focus of the fic - And the MC is still an 8 Year Old so I have time to decide. By the time he's genin, I'll have decided.
Thanks for the support! I do try XD Truthfully, writing a good synopsis is an art I have no flair for. So I might as well elaborate on what the story has to offer in my "Review" lol. However, if you think I should try and change the synopsis I'll do so! It's pretty much the thing that decides whether someone reads this or not so feedback on that is also appreciated!
_Axys_:sometimes, I wish there were more comments like this in fics. I'm just saying this because sometimes, the synopsis on its own just doesn't do justice to those works. and if u are wondering if I like it or not. I do, and I'll read till the very end
I do agree on your view about the synopsis being one of the main attraction to make some1 read your story. but I don't mean u should change it. A synopsis must always have some type of snippet of the story, some sort of short narrative that resumes at least the main story. but it's always appreciated to have a view of the author's plans(even a little bit) for the future of the fic. Your comments is the perfect example, it has some traits of the MC and also a small explanation about the story's future (even though it can change)
BurgerNoTomatoes:Thanks for the support! I do try XD Truthfully, writing a good synopsis is an art I have no flair for. So I might as well elaborate on what the story has to offer in my "Review" lol. However, if you think I should try and change the synopsis I'll do so! It's pretty much the thing that decides whether someone reads this or not so feedback on that is also appreciated!image
_Axys_:I do agree on your view about the synopsis being one of the main attraction to make some1 read your story. but I don't mean u should change it. A synopsis must always have some type of snippet of the story, some sort of short narrative that resumes at least the main story. but it's always appreciated to have a view of the author's plans(even a little bit) for the future of the fic. Your comments is the perfect example, it has some traits of the MC and also a small explanation about the story's future (even though it can change)
Undecided yet. It's not the focus of the fic - And the MC is still an 8 Year Old so I have time to decide. By the time he's genin, I'll have decided.
Yuki_55:whos the fl?
I don't, but if I ever make one with the time I have for writing a chapter - This is currently the best I can do XD. The Patreon would really have no benefits but to support me.
Victor_7740:Do u have a patreon? Cause I’ll totally sub to it, for extra chapters ofc :))
Blackreaper1:Hey author have you ever thought of a fanfic of gojo being the dxd universe?
