Review Detail of Mistyar in Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto

As I'm writing this the fic is in its early stages but it's looking really good. Onto the review: Writing Quality:5/5 supreme. In all the fanfics I've read I'd notice a bit of grammatical errors this is pristine. good stuff. Story Development:4/5 Pacing is nice but l can see you getting better at it. The second chapter of the child arc before the academy seemed a bit drawn out but you established how the characters synergise with each other so no complaints. Character Design: 5/5 Loveable MC nara clan isn't loud and annoying love shikaku and shikimaru The main character akira nara for once in a Naruto fanfic will not make you cough blood like your in a wuxia novel. just for that read it also I adore ten shadows. Updating Stability: 4/5 The fic is in its early stages so can't say a lot bout this. World Background: 4/5 only 4/5 cause I've personally suffered so much Naruto fics. To the author you'r doing God's work supremely done. I hope l can see this go a long and prosperous way. Also thanks for replying to comments! In short: author Is goated same with the story definitely have my eyes peeled for this. this is the good stuff