Review Detail of Narcox in Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
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solid 3 star for me the MC waste so much time with Hermione kind killed my interest on this make no sense for someone that wants to be next dark lord waste time with someone like Hermione that only see the rules and nothing else is only a matter for this friendship ends
Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
Kitty_Loves_Milk
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Thomas Shelby is not a true villain , and I have no problem with Hermione since Shelby had wifed a spy in canon . Also there should be some interection wit mcs which u did with Hermione. Also being villain doesn't mean u have to be like voldemort who kills left and right , u can be like grindelwald , so don't listen to the other comment .
Kitty_Loves_Milk:Yup not all but some.
Kitty_Loves_Milk:I have changed my mind and I will edit out old chaps with her soon.
TheComedy_Mask:hey author did you edit old chapters of her or not
well like i said any form of friendship with any harry potter character is useless considering that there all upright and he should just trust anyone just because they say something also i hope you don't di the most stupid thing author do for there villain stories which is making the mc keep his promises it's outright stupid for villain whos'sgonna be dark lord to return favor he should acutuallybetray those who help if it gives more power or benefits thats what true villain is no offense it's your novek but this is just a suggestion
Kitty_Loves_Milk:Yup not all but some.
Wait rly?? I’m at ch 39 and they are REALLY heavy with hermiony in them ( sorry for the bad grammar, im not very good at English and it’s 02:00 atm so I’m really tired)
Kitty_Loves_Milk:Yup not all but some.
also i dont mean to hate i like most stuff so far, but him giving her the earings/leafs is a bit to much (for me atleast)
Immortal_Duck7:Wait rly?? I’m at ch 39 and they are REALLY heavy with hermiony in them ( sorry for the bad grammar, im not very good at English and it’s 02:00 atm so I’m really tired)
Immortal_Duck7:also i dont mean to hate i like most stuff so far, but him giving her the earings/leafs is a bit to much (for me atleast)
also i really dont mean to hate, just find it weird (and kinda anoying) cus withmost thing where hermione is concerned he does stuff that i feel like somone with his personality would not really do, like in the start he wanted to manipulate, her but to give her somthing like the earings which she doesnt even understand how rare and valuble they are is kinda wierd (sorry for the bad english)
Kitty_Loves_Milk:She rarely appears in the later chapters.