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Review Detail of BeyondTheLaw in RISE OF THE XIAO CLAN : FAMILY NURTURING SYSTEM

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BeyondTheLaw
BeyondTheLawLv1110mthBeyondTheLaw

I like the idea behind the story. But the author is really tarnishing his own work with the grammar faults found in the chapters. Author, if you see this, you can use chat gpt to ask for some guidance before uploading a chapter. It'll be able to help you, at least for the mistakes you're making.

RISE OF THE XIAO CLAN : FAMILY NURTURING SYSTEM

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BeyondTheLaw
BeyondTheLawLv11BeyondTheLaw

Author took the feedback I guess