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Garland
GarlandLv49mthGarland

Another harem one piece fanfic where the relationship between him and the girls are just immediate. No form of obstacle, development or actual connection but just them immediately falling in love just because.

Dimensional Wanderer Starting with a Diary in One piece.

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_Ni_ck_
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The mc doesn't have a harem, he hasn't even got Nami, who is the first girl he met, he flirts with them, but they have already gotten used to this, Kaya and Nojiko, but Kaya is a special case since she fell in love at first sight with the mc and it's The only one so far that doesn't reject the MC's advances and Nojiko likes the MC a bit but she's not 100% in love with him in the future, maybe she will fall in love with him completely but not for now.

Burningnova13
Burningnova13Lv4Burningnova13

What was that sinopsis about then?

_Ni_ck_:The mc doesn't have a harem, he hasn't even got Nami, who is the first girl he met, he flirts with them, but they have already gotten used to this, Kaya and Nojiko, but Kaya is a special case since she fell in love at first sight with the mc and it's The only one so far that doesn't reject the MC's advances and Nojiko likes the MC a bit but she's not 100% in love with him in the future, maybe she will fall in love with him completely but not for now.
Garland
GarlandLv4Garland

You have a synopsis with different girls saying they like him and a hashtag with the word harem right? He may not have a harem right now but he will have a harem in the future right? Do you know how stories work? All i am saying is that the way how the relationship is going to happen is to be built without any form of actual foundation. All they are going to do is read his diary and because they know how he feels somehow immediately makes them easily fall in love with him. No effort or actual form of connection that makes them having a relationship believable.

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

So puts tags of its not that?

_Ni_ck_:The mc doesn't have a harem, he hasn't even got Nami, who is the first girl he met, he flirts with them, but they have already gotten used to this, Kaya and Nojiko, but Kaya is a special case since she fell in love at first sight with the mc and it's The only one so far that doesn't reject the MC's advances and Nojiko likes the MC a bit but she's not 100% in love with him in the future, maybe she will fall in love with him completely but not for now.