Review Detail of Mx_Third in The Seven Hells

Hi Author! First of all, I like the idea, the setting, and how you narrate the story. The writing is good, making pictures inside my head was easy because of it and I enjoyed reading this, but as I read through the chapter, I noticed some punctuation errors. It doesn't really bother the experience for me, but it would be better to correct them as there are some readers who are sensitive to that detail. I hope my review could help you, great work on this book!