Review Detail of One2Turtle in System in the Multiverse [R18]

I dont like it. Mc gets humiliated by his own vice cap and goes sulking about it like a child. I thought he was supposed to be a transmigrator but he just acts like how a real kid would act. The story is all over the place, it’s but a speedrun to who knows where. I understand it’s just a wish fulfillment and author writes for himself but it really sucks. Atleast the writing is okay