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I honestly don’t know if this gets better, because I couldn’t tolerate even finishing the first chapter. Whoever did the translation should find a better bot to run it through, as it is worse than google translate.

Zombie Apocalypse: Creation

IPI

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IPI
IPIAuthorIPI

I understand, my first few chapters was from when I started writing, so it's has a lot of issues in it.

Jheydi327
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Well.... TBH.. Author you should rewrite slowly starting from 1st chapter to 50.. The first 5-10 chapters gives the important impression for a reader..most doesn't past 20 or more chaps because of quality of a story.. You can tell from how many reviews there is that's not past 20 reviews ...And for my Opinion it's too lacking in many ways.. Needs a lot more improvements

IPI:I understand, my first few chapters was from when I started writing, so it's has a lot of issues in it.
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IPIAuthorIPI

Yeah. Currently rewriting them one by one. Just going to take a while since the book is already over 200 chapters in. I probably take abreak next month to solely focus on rewriting the older chapters.

Jheydi327:Well.... TBH.. Author you should rewrite slowly starting from 1st chapter to 50.. The first 5-10 chapters gives the important impression for a reader..most doesn't past 20 or more chaps because of quality of a story.. You can tell from how many reviews there is that's not past 20 reviews ...And for my Opinion it's too lacking in many ways.. Needs a lot more improvements