Review Detail of IPI in Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
Review detail
I decided to write a self-review of the book so far. Or a more of Q and A. -The MC is very indecisive, he is not your typical cold blooded or a leader. Rather more of an average guy who are pushed to do things not by his will, but by the people around him. -But when he is face with challenges, he doesn't back down from it. No matter what it is, even if it is risking his own life. -The book has harem as the tag suggested. There is MC's relative in the harem. -System? There's no system but there is superpowers. (There is no Yuri. All of them had been removed.) (There's no Ntred .)
Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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Santy_Melay:Que clase de estúpido no sospecha cuando su contraseña aparece en otro lado.
the average and indecisiveness is abit turn off..,,,,, will he become polished as a strong character or remain indecisive and no leadership cause i see kingdom building tag here,? ,,,,no redeeming quality as a main character and just being pushed by those around him to move forward, to kill, will all this weakness remain till the end most specially indecisiveness,?,,,and was he smart not to the level of genius but at least not a super dumbo guy,?,,,,
He will become much stronger and decisive as time progresses. It takes time for a character that has been inactive in their entire life to start making active decisions. About the redeeming quality, there's a reason why he is chosen as a leader rather than anyone else. He knows how to make compromises and pick the right choice at the end of the day when being pushed from both sides of an argument. Or in a one sided argument. As the story progresses, he has been pushed to make more active decision himself. Just like a kingdom building, the MC himself needs building. And about the dumb part... the guy knows what is happening around him, he isn't some super oblivious person. He's only allowing it to happen because he doesn't find any harm in doing so.
rbp:the average and indecisiveness is abit turn off..,,,,, will he become polished as a strong character or remain indecisive and no leadership cause i see kingdom building tag here,? ,,,,no redeeming quality as a main character and just being pushed by those around him to move forward, to kill, will all this weakness remain till the end most specially indecisiveness,?,,,and was he smart not to the level of genius but at least not a super dumbo guy,?,,,,
The light yuri parts. I went back to all the chapters to manually edit them all out. (The story is still completely unaffected since its only the break scenes that have it)
Celestials_Dragon:contained what?
IPI:The light yuri parts. I went back to all the chapters to manually edit them all out. (The story is still completely unaffected since its only the break scenes that have it)
Some reader don't like it. So I took them out. The chapter that used to have them are the night with Lili and Banli during Yanyan's first time. There are other time but I can't remember it. Anyway unless there is a overwhelming consensus asking me to put it back in, I probably won't add slight element of light yuri back in.
Celestials_Dragon:then why take them out? also what chapters had/have them?
IPI:Some reader don't like it. So I took them out. The chapter that used to have them are the night with Lili and Banli during Yanyan's first time. There are other time but I can't remember it. Anyway unless there is a overwhelming consensus asking me to put it back in, I probably won't add slight element of light yuri back in.
IPI:Some reader don't like it. So I took them out. The chapter that used to have them are the night with Lili and Banli during Yanyan's first time. There are other time but I can't remember it. Anyway unless there is a overwhelming consensus asking me to put it back in, I probably won't add slight element of light yuri back in.
IPI:Some reader don't like it. So I took them out. The chapter that used to have them are the night with Lili and Banli during Yanyan's first time. There are other time but I can't remember it. Anyway unless there is a overwhelming consensus asking me to put it back in, I probably won't add slight element of light yuri back in.
