Review Detail of Seraphim_Sama in Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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Edition. I read the first chapter and I will give my review that I rarely give. It has a lot of potential, readable and all, the only thing that bothers a bit is that sometimes I feel like you are confusing Xiaoyun with Yunyun, but from the flow of the paragraph it is understandable. But you have to put a little more attention to that part. I'm a fan of the harem, but with coherency. I see this one as having a lot of potential in that even though it's in###t, it makes for something worth watching (since it's obviously fictional). I'll keep reading and try to give another review if I don't forget, keep up the good work author.
Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
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Probably just an auto trigger word.(No need for manual review, just automatic) Probably all book review aren't allow to have certain words like those. Because in the book its fine to use I think. Just review is banned since reviews don't have you know, age limitation to look at (Book has restricted/18+ tags, but review doesn't). Maybe comment has this too. I haven't tested that.
Seraphim_Sama:I already saw, how delicate they came out on this page, where is the free expression?
Nah, initially, it was just 晓云(male) and 晓芸(female). Just a grass radical on top. Now I have edited it to be Xiaoyue for the female one to reduce name confusion due to its similarity with Yunyun and Yanyan(晓月), which is going to be implemented over the winter break (during December-January)
SuSunnyGM:MC is 晓云 xiǎo yún (daybreak cloud or Akatsuki)His twin sister is 霄云 xiāo yún (Heavenly cloud )??