Your book starts off very interesting with the copy concept. A couple decisions the MC makes that to me make no sense and nothing is explained is one when fighting the creature with high darknes ability why not copy it since he only had an intermediate one. Two when fighting the fire lion in the trial when not copy the blaze strike skill? And the part where he goes to the desertt I get what your trying to do but this part of the story is really boring and to many chapters with no progress makes it boring. You need to wrap up the desert much quicker this is really hard to read and hoping it ends soon I liked the beginnin but at this point it’s hard to keep going. I would even consider rewriting this part to condense it into a few chapters instead of the like 15-20 it is so far.
Supreme_V
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LIKEdude, thank you so much, honestly judging my desert scene even I would have annoyed with the story, I know my mistake and don't worry I am thinking about editing my chapters and merging two chapters together to .ake it snall and now let's answer your questions, first why don't he copy the first monster's ability like the later one, it is because that monster was way more powerful than him, his life was on stake, he didn't dare to touch the monster, maybe one flaw , and he died in monster's hand, and second why didn't he copy the Lion's skill, it is solely because those are special innate skills for monster that human can't have and lastly thank you so much for your kind review