Review Detail of NewbieJimjim in VRMMORPG: The Land Of Essenxia

Even though the writing and storytelling might need some improvement, it is still understandable and fun to read. It's kinda unique that you add the break-the-fourth-wall element in the novel, such as saying that the protagonist is dumb etc. Overall, I hope you still keep writing and improve in the future. Tip: each chapter should at least have 1000 words; it should not be less than that. That is just my opinion.