The writing does not grasp my attention at all. There aren't too noticeable grammar mistakes, considering it is written by A.I. I don't mind the MC too much but the story development is a little too slow for my liking. All in all the story feels bland but it is held up by the promise of a good premise. Good luck moving forward. đ
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