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Concept is good. But I feel that the characters are too bland or OOC. so much info dumping and so little interaction/drama between characters. But you can improve too, I guess. also the HSPC would not have let him go to UA ,Hawks was a fine example of being HSPC tool. He's too OP and all the people know about it. You should have gradually released abilities one by one instead on everything before going to UA. Anyway, Thanks for trying.!! Good One.

In MHA as an UCHIHA

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What do you suggest I do now?