Review Detail of King_Wyrtt in Becoming Rich in Primitive World

The thing that bothers me the most is this reads like a sitcom. Like you need to get it over with as soon as possible. The chapters are way too short in fact this review is longer than most of your chapters. Chapters should be 1000 to 3000 words especially if you plan to minimize it in the future. I assume it takes place in the Stone Age due to the title but other than that we have no clue as to the setting of the book. I like the whole invention thing but feel you speed through it fast savor it have fun with it. The system is cool as well, however, the grammar thing could be misconstrued as making fun of Asian people or other racial groups having difficulties pronouncing English. I'm sure you don't mean it but it could be taken that way. Also, have more dialog and story to flesh out the actors it seems like the only thing you center on is the main story. Let's learn more about the MC and his mom