chapter are way to short.. I suggest to make chapters of at least 1000 to 1500 words.. and also I would suggest to combine the current chapters
LuenorSureva14
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LIKEI only read the first 3 chapters but here's my personal opinion... I would rather have 1-2 chapters per week than the current chapters lenght.. the rating is mostly because I'm annoyed by the short chapters, it doesn't give me the feel of reading a chapter of a novel but more a paragraph.. how about this I will try to read your current chapters again and will give you a more honest rating.. and If I like the story I will try delete the review if it is possible
LuenorSureva14:writing 1000 word long chapters would take a lot of time and I would only be able to give 1-2 chapters per week then