Good job the characters are well built not that complicated because marvel is already complicated enough and the idea of Parker having no spider powers instead uses his knowledge to good use unlike other fanfic that only want to get stronger by the self the story is also reasonable enough to fit reality but have enough fantasy and sci fi to make it interesting to readers such as myself. Lastly the rewriting is good for my perspective I like the way you tell side characters their story .
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