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Review Detail of Sinbau in Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

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Sinbau
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A good read! Things that I liked, - Good length and pace - Visuals, very descriptive when it comes to appearance. I liked being able to envision that - Word choice, author can implement ‘fancy’ words without making it look like it was thrown in There’s barely any critiques I have for this novel. The author does good with grammar, the only one I can think of is the characters way of speaking to each other. If it’s a tough moment one would have an outburst and maybe even tried to be violent but with the MC personality I don’t think they’ll do that and remain calm to a point. Otherwise good work author [img=recommend]!

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

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Dreadfiend
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in the beginning it was ntr

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Thank you! 🥹

Rionn
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Ntr?

RealmWeaver:Thank you! 🥹
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No

Rionn:Ntr?