I have to say, I love the world-building, and the word choice is also very good.The storyline is interesting and intriguing. I love the appearance of the elven figure as the bearer of Orth's knowledge. I do look forward to reading more and experiencing the journey of Luke as he gathers the pieces and makes the heart whole once again. I love your writing style, the word choices, and the story progression👏Update more often dear, I look forward to it.
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