*my first reviewe đ*So far it's been great reading this story.The dialogue has a nice flow to it although it could still be improved as it felt a little rushed as if trying to force a change in mood (reference chapter 2-3.) and I like the author for giving himself some room for development of his story can't wait to see more of his writing. I am rooting for you. đ
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