Review Detail of Rara_Jasmin in The Rise Of The Villainess Mafia!

Item: The Rise Of The Villainess Mafia!
Rating: 4.4

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Rara_JasminLv27mthRara_Jasmin

This is indeed an excellent novel that I'm thoroughly enjoying. Your ideas are truly captivating. I've already devoured 11 chapters, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the rest. However, I've noticed a few minor grammatical mistakes and instances where 'me' is used instead of 'her' in some chapters. A small revision could enhance the overall reading experience. Please don't take my feedback as criticism. Your work is undeniably brilliant, and a bit of editing before uploading can make it shine even brighter.

The Rise Of The Villainess Mafia!

Evara_Freya

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Evara_FreyaAuthorEvara_Freya

Thank you for your feedback. Actually, there was a time when the few initial chapters were in first person but had to edit it to third. Also, I am working on correcting all those mistakes. I am currently done with editing 5 chapters and will be editing others soon.

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Rara_JasminLv2Rara_Jasmin

Best of luck, author Evara. I eagerly await the edited version of the next chapter.

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Evara_FreyaAuthorEvara_Freya

Hey Rara, I am done editing chapters, you can read now. I will be done with all the chapters by tomorrow. Thank you for waiting patiently

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