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Review Detail of _Khaled_ in One Piece: Fūjin

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* I read up to chapter 25* Story 5/5 Grammer 4/5 Storytelling 3/5 Pace 5/5 MC’s growth 5/5 This novel is somewhat unique , [SPOILERS STARTS] the MC grew up in poverty alongside his lil bro and mother who both eventually die which makes him want to get revenge for them against a kingdom and a pirate crew, the MC unlocks a minor aspect of observation Haki pretty early on due to his many hunting sessions. After leaving the first island he finds a devil fruit which seems to be a wind type devil fruit (we still don’t know the type) and his progress with the devil fruit is good but not ridiculously. The only problem I see very often in this novel is that the MC sometimes thinks in 3rd person. Overall rating 4.5/5 (up to ch25)

One Piece: Fūjin

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Thanks for the nice review :D. I will try to fix the 3rd person