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ebeilijan
ebeilijanLv310mthebeilijan

Very good grammar and character design but there are so many unnecessary words that make me tired of reading as I have to constant find out what they mean. the same words are repeated and make me loose interest.the MC will surely be witty and naughty and i hope that he finds some competitor who can test him out.

Bloodborne Dominion

Raven325

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Fair point! Gonna consider this in the future chapters, thanks for the review.

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Thanks for the review btw, much love!